Monday, November 16, 2009

Birds Flew from His Mouth

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Birds
flew from
his mouth – larks,
sparrows, swallows and black –
they fluttered forth in strange formations
scribing wild story-land
adventures:
his great
love.
.

3 comments:

  1. Thanks for the poem. I'm not sure what's its about but I enjoyed reading the words over and over again.

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  2. Interesting poem, Jim. Quite original. Words flow so beautifully. Silvia

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  3. I like this poem very, very much. I am commenting again after reading over. I love the rhtyhm you are getting from the words.Bravo, Silvia

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