tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783101555425442514.post5276566269054706256..comments2019-05-03T06:40:00.046-04:00Comments on Diamond Poetry: Playing with Prose Poems #2James at Mountain Diamond Poetryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17678167598991171219noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783101555425442514.post-57878796808226368382010-04-02T05:58:49.820-04:002010-04-02T05:58:49.820-04:00This is incredible writing. What great images, and...This is incredible writing. What great images, and how well the words flowed.matt at shadow of irishttp://www.shadowofiris.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783101555425442514.post-4207003042475498942010-03-19T23:36:37.474-04:002010-03-19T23:36:37.474-04:00"Slim as a bird's tongue"--nice line..."Slim as a bird's tongue"--nice line! I can feel this music box in my hand, its weight, the tinny vibrations as it plays. You do such a great job with the sensual details, the object becomes real.<br />KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783101555425442514.post-36011170646268214282010-03-01T10:25:36.878-05:002010-03-01T10:25:36.878-05:00Thanks Rosemary!
that's high praise, indeed. A...Thanks Rosemary!<br />that's high praise, indeed. A slightly revised version was published by "Barnwood."<br />Hope all is well with you<br />JJames at Mountain Diamond Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17678167598991171219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8783101555425442514.post-68881830983744321422010-03-01T09:51:50.361-05:002010-03-01T09:51:50.361-05:00Jim, I wish I could paint this music box in oils a...Jim, I wish I could paint this music box in oils as beautifully as you did with words! After my third trip back to read "Music Box", I printed it! I can hear the music!Rosemaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03123711998908894938noreply@blogger.com